Lucky  

senfully 55F  
618 posts
2/14/2021 4:25 am
Lucky


Lucky
written January 20th, 2021

"I've always been lucky," he says,
standing at his gate
talking this dirt road
"I survived an inoperable brain tumor, cancer
and they took one of my lungs,
but I had 2, so I'm fine.
Always been lucky."

He turns back to his home and dogs
rolling the gate shut behind him.

I am left to wonder
how does fate dispense luck?
Who gets it? What type? How much?

Is it years served?
arrests made?
women loved?
raised?
dogs cared for and buried?

I sit in my car and watch him walk
through the trees to the house he built
with plenty of room to turn around in

I see the inexorable path
the luck dispensed and choices made
that has brought him to this moment
he and his dogs
at the end of this dirt road.

If he could choose different luck
would he?
this man who has always been lucky.

senfully 55F  
443 posts
2/14/2021 4:28 am

This might be my only poem about someone I actually know. I took poetic license with a few details. Sometimes I try to paint pictures, and this might be a picture that only I can see. I probably haven't shared enough for others to see it, but then that's poems isn't it? I write, and you take what you do from it. Through the lens of your own life.

I asked my friend if I could post this, and he said yes. We haven't talked about it yet, but I suspect that he would say he wouldn't change anything. I think most of us know, we can choose the next step on the path, but not where the path ends.


69ereatwetpussy 61M
6774 posts
2/14/2021 10:34 am

Luck if not for bad i'ld have none
Luck it comes and goes
Luck is taking a chance
Luck you can't buy it
Luck don't live bye it
Every day we walk on this early is luck
To walk across the road and not get hit is luck
To find a person that love you for who you are is luck
People with luck are the luckiest people in the world
People with out luck live the best way they can
I very lucky I met you now I'm blessed even more. Xoxoxo


kamaruhl3 63M
4985 posts
2/14/2021 12:25 pm

this is a good question you bring up. very insightful. and always beautiful


MelbLife 58M
313 posts
2/15/2021 5:29 am

they offer luck
a substance unseen
which we can use
to live this life diverse
beyond the boundaries
of experience and knowledge
of learnings and commonsense
and yet when you look at luck
you understand it has two faces
can have many lesser graces
bring misfortune and sorrow
turn idyllic day to tragic tomorrow.


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