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Responding to Erotic Stories
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Responding to Erotic Stories Don't get me wrong...i LOVE me some erotic stories. I just don't know an appropriate response to most of the stories. This may not be a big deal for most, but i am never quite sure how to respond. Do i tell this person that i have an enormously massive yet majestic erection, or simply leave it at, Nice Story? For some reason, both just seem a little inappropriate. I haven't met this person and I'm not intimately involved with them, so is my erection out of line? Nice story, just seems lacking. I understand there are many other responses to navigate through, but I'm just trying to remain concise. My own erotica is terrible as well. As a writer, i wrote a script for a porno that i had in mind called, Eatapuss Rex. I don't think anyone understood it and no one wanted to fuck their mom on camera. The other short vignette that i wrote involved a beautiful middle aged woman stepping out of the shower and sensually toweling off in a light haxey filtered bathroom. She notices the landscaper outside mowing her lawn as she continues on with lotioning her soft naked body. Suddenly, there is a sharp knock at the door. She grabs her bathrobe and draws the strings tight around her waist. She opens her door to see the landscaper, sweating and his chest heaving. He asks her for a glass of water as she stands there in her bathrobe contemplating what to do next. She scans him with a discriminating eye, then tells him to drink from the hose and slams the door. The End. |
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Great story! No happy ending for the landscaper this time around!
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Of course people who write Erotic Stories like to hear a comment, if I write a funny story I would like to hear that people enjoy it and laugh out loud, and if its a thriller that people who read it are on the edge of there seat. So when I wrote my few stories posted here, it looks like over 1000 people all over the world have read my stories, but only about 10 have left comments, when someone leaves a comment its like the writer has personally touched them (so to speak) 
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Tell the truth, though if the story really sucks some well judged constructive criticism is probably preferable Erotica inspired by lust Boyhood Crush Athletic Cougar Deflowers Teenager The Work Experience Restroom Ecstasy The Lettings Agent Please vote and comment
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